In fact, writing that summary took me under a minute, with little thought.
The one thing a summary can provide is background for your commentary.
It will serve as the body of work that I’m going to commentate on.
First, let me show you how I would write a summary of this scene: In this scene from the 2004 movie Shaun of the Dead, Shaun (played by Simon Pegg) wakes up with a hangover and walks to the convenience store to buy a soda and an ice cream.
Have your essay edited by a Kibin editor, a peer, or a parent. Have you struggled with using too much summary in your essays?
[Sample Assignment] "Even a failure can still be valuable." Discuss the statement above using an example or examples from literature, the arts, history, current events, politics, science and technology, sports, or your experience or observation.
As I discussed in my previous post about writing a cover letter, these phrases are redundant (you wrote the essay, so it’s obvious you think, believe, or hope what is written) and they reduce your credibility.
In general, you should provide approximately two points of commentary for every specific detail you offer.
You need to understand the difference between commentary and summary.
While both writing styles can be used to discuss another piece of work (like a play, book, movie, or poem), this is about the sum total of their similarities.