Not only does this show colleges that you’ve have done your homework, but it also demonstrates your interest in the college – and colleges want to admit students who are likely to enroll.
Show your knowledge of the college by mentioning specific courses, professors, places of interest, and more.
Find something else that reveals something new and that shows you put a lot of thought into your essay. When developing a topic that reveals something new, find a way to frame the story or idea that shows a slice of your life or the event.
If your study of AP biology conflicts with your religious views, write about that and how you reconciled the two. Be descriptive and give details that appeal to the senses – taste, touch, smell, etc.
So many students think that they “know” what colleges want from an applicant, and this can have a big influence over their essays.
Students will abuse the thesaurus and write about strange topics in an effort to impress and stand out.
Show how you fit into the campus culture and how you will impact the community through specific examples.
DON’T say what you think the admissions office wants to hear.
Take the time to write original responses to all the prompts.
It’s a lot of work, but it will pay off in the end. When tailoring responses to individual college prompts, it’s important to use specific details you’ve learned through visiting and research.